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man: wording and grammar updates 

This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted: comma setting, missing words/preposition choice.
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Jan Engelhardt 2013-11-07 01:17:48 +01:00 committed by Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
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man/hostnamectl.xml
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remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
talk to a remote
talk to the remote
system.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/localectl.xml
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@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
talk to a remote
talk to the remote
system.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/loginctl.xml
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@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host</option></term>
<listitem><para>Execute operation
<listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to

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man/machinectl.xml
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@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host=</option></term>
<listitem><para>Execute operation
<listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
<term><option>-M</option></term>
<term><option>--machine=</option></term>
<listitem><para>Execute operation on a
<listitem><para>Execute the operation on a
local container. Specify a container
name to connect to.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
<listitem><para>Open a terminal login
session to a container. This will
create a TTY connection to a specific
container and asks for execution of a
container and asks for the execution of a
getty on it. Note that this is only
supported for containers running
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>

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man/systemctl.xml
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@ -64,15 +64,15 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
system and service manager.</para>
<para>For Unit Commands the <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> represents full name of unit.
<para>For unit commands, the <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> represents full name of the unit.
<programlisting>
systemctl start foo.service
</programlisting>
For Unit File Commands the <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> represents full name of the unit file, or absolute path to the unit file.
For unit file commands, the <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> represents the full name of the unit file, or the absolute path to the unit file.
<programlisting>
systemctl start /path/to/foo.service
</programlisting>
While working with services/service files, <command>systemctl</command> is able to append .service suffix when it is missing.
While working with services/service files, <command>systemctl</command> implicitly appends the ".service" suffix when it is missing.
<programlisting>
systemctl start foo
</programlisting></para>
@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ systemctl start foo
<term><option>--host</option></term>
<listitem>
<para>Execute operation remotely. Specify a hostname, or
<para>Execute the operation remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>, to connect to. This
will use SSH to talk to the remote systemd
instance.</para>

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man/systemd-analyze.xml
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@ -209,7 +209,7 @@
<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host=</option></term>
<listitem><para>Execute operation
<listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by
<literal>@</literal>, to connect
@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
<term><option>-M</option></term>
<term><option>--machine=</option></term>
<listitem><para>Execute operation on a
<listitem><para>Execute the operation on a
local container. Specify a container
name to connect to.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/systemd-halt.service.xml
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@ -74,11 +74,11 @@
<filename>kexec.target</filename> to execute the
respective actions.</para>
<para>When these services are run they ensure that PID
<para>When these services are run, they ensure that PID
1 is replaced by the
<filename>/usr/lib/systemd/systemd-shutdown</filename>
tool which is then responsible for the actual
shutdown. Before shutting down this binary will try to
shutdown. Before shutting down, this binary will try to
unmount all remaining file systems, disable all
remaining swap devices, detach all remaining storage
devices and kill all remaining processes.</para>

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man/systemd-run.xml
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<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host=</option></term>
<listitem><para>Execute operation
<listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<term><option>-M</option></term>
<term><option>--machine=</option></term>
<listitem><para>Execute operation on a
<listitem><para>Execute the operation on a
local container. Specify a container
name to connect to.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml
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@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
local or remote destination socket.</para>
<para>One use of this tool is to provide
socket-activation support for services that do not
socket activation support for services that do not
natively support socket activation. On behalf of the
service to activate, the proxy inherits the socket
from systemd, accepts each client connection, opens a

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man/systemd-system.conf.xml
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@ -101,15 +101,15 @@
<listitem><para>Configures the default
time-outs for starting and stopping of
units, as well as the default time to
sleep between automatic restarts of a
sleep between automatic restarts of
units, as configured per-unit in
<varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname>,
<varname>TimeoutStopSec=</varname> and
<varname>RestartSec=</varname> (for
service units see
service units, see
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
for details on the per-unit
settings). For non-service units
settings). For non-service units,
<varname>DefaultTimeoutStartSec=</varname>
sets the default
<varname>TimeoutSec=</varname> value.

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man/systemd.mount.xml
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Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or
a time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
logic. Default value is setted up in manager configuration
file via <varname>DefaultTimeoutStart=</varname>.</para></listitem>
logic. The default value is set from the manager configuration
file's <varname>DefaultTimeoutStart=</varname> variable.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>

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man/systemd.service.xml
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Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or a
time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> in
logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> from the
manager configuration file, except when
<varname>Type=oneshot</varname> is
used in which case the timeout
used, in which case the timeout
is disabled by default.
</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@ -546,7 +546,7 @@
Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or a
time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> in
logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> from the
manager configuration file.
</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/systemd.socket.xml
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Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or
a time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> in
logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> from the
manager configuration file.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/systemd.swap.xml
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Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or
a time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> in
logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> from the
manager configuration file.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>

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man/timedatectl.xml
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<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host=</option></term>
<listitem><para>Execute operation
<listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to