man: improve wording and comma usage in systemd.journal-fields(7)

Improve wording under "Description" and "_KERNEL_DEVICE="
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Jason St. John 2013-12-10 00:10:03 -05:00 committed by Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
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@ -51,14 +51,14 @@
<title>Description</title>
<para>Entries in the journal resemble an environment
block in their syntax, however with fields that can
block in their syntax but with fields that can
include binary data. Primarily, fields are formatted
UTF-8 text strings, and binary formatting is used only
where formatting as UTF-8 text strings makes little
sense. New fields may freely be defined by
applications, but a few fields have special
meaning. All fields with special meanings are
optional. In some cases fields may appear more than
optional. In some cases, fields may appear more than
once per entry.</para>
</refsect1>
@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
<term><varname>_UID=</varname></term>
<term><varname>_GID=</varname></term>
<listitem>
<para>The process, user and
<para>The process, user, and
group ID of the process the
journal entry originates from
formatted as a decimal
@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
<term><varname>_CMDLINE=</varname></term>
<listitem>
<para>The name, the executable
path and the command line of
path, and the command line of
the process the journal entry
originates from.</para>
</listitem>
@ -389,12 +389,12 @@
the major and minor of the
device node, separated by <literal>:</literal>
and prefixed by <literal>b</literal>. Similar
for character devices, but
for character devices but
prefixed by <literal>c</literal>. For network
devices the interface index,
devices, this is the interface index
prefixed by <literal>n</literal>. For all other
devices <literal>+</literal> followed by the
subsystem name, followed by
devices, this is the subsystem name
prefixed by <literal>+</literal>, followed by
<literal>:</literal>, followed by the kernel
device name.</para>
</listitem>