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doc: corrections to words and forms 

This patch exchange words which are inappropriate for a situation,
deletes duplicated words, and adds particles where needed.
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Jan Engelhardt 2014-05-08 01:28:44 +02:00 committed by Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
parent 0c9d8f1d4b
commit dca348bcbb
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NEWS
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@ -2348,7 +2348,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 190:
dir: %_presetdir.
* journald will now warn if it ca not forward a message to the
syslog daemon because it's socket is full.
syslog daemon because its socket is full.
* timedated will no longer write or process /etc/timezone,
except on Debian. As we do not support late mounted /usr

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man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml
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@ -115,8 +115,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
space for a string to message <parameter>m</parameter>. If behaves
similarly to <function>sd_bus_message_append_basic</function> with
type <literal>s</literal>, but instead of copying a string into
the the message, it returns a pointer to the destination area to
the caller in pointer <parameter>p</parameter>. Space for string
the message, it returns a pointer to the destination area to
the caller in pointer <parameter>p</parameter>. Space for the string
of length <parameter>size</parameter> plus the terminating
<constant>NUL</constant> is allocated.</para>
</refsect1>

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man/sd_bus_message_append_strv.xml
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@ -77,8 +77,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<para>The memory pointed at by <parameter>p</parameter> and the
contents of the strings themselves are copied into the memory area
containing the message and may be changed after this call. Note
that the signature of <parameter>l</parameter> parameter is be
treated as <type>const char* const*</type>, and the the contents
that the signature of <parameter>l</parameter> parameter is to be
treated as <type>const char *const *</type>, and the contents
will not be modified.</para>
</refsect1>

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man/sd_bus_open_user.xml
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@ -96,13 +96,13 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<title>Description</title>
<para><function>sd_bus_open_user()</function> creates a new bus
object and opens a connection to the the user bus.
object and opens a connection to the user bus.
<function>sd_bus_open_system()</function> does the same, but
connects to the system bus.</para>
<para>If the <varname>$DBUS_SESSION_BUS_ADDRESS</varname> environment
variable is set
(c.f. <citerefentry><refentrytitle>environ</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>),
(cf. <citerefentry><refentrytitle>environ</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>),
it will be used as the address of the user bus. This variable can
contain multiple addresses separated by <literal>;</literal>. If
this variable is not set, a suitable default for the default user

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man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml
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@ -101,11 +101,11 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
takes a bus path and a prefix string, plus a place to store the
returned external identifier string. If the bus path does not
start with the specified prefix, 0 is returned and the returned
string is set to <constant>NULL</constant>. Otherwise the the
string is set to <constant>NULL</constant>. Otherwise the
string following the prefix is unescaped and returned in the
external identifier string.</para>
<para>The escaping used will will replace all characters which are
<para>The escaping used will replace all characters which are
invalid in a bus object path by <literal>_</literal> followed by a
hexadecimal value. As a special case, the empty string will be
replaced by a lone <literal>_</literal>.</para>

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man/sd_event_new.xml
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@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<para><function>sd_event_unref()</function> decreases the
reference counter of the specified event loop object by one. If
the counter hits zero the event loop object is freed. Note that it
is freed regardless if it is the default event loop object of a
is freed regardless of whether it is the default event loop object for a
thread or not. This means that allocating an event loop with
<function>sd_event_default()</function>, then releasing it and
then acquiring a new one with

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man/systemctl.xml
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@ -724,7 +724,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service
<para>Show terse runtime status information about one or
more units, followed by most recent log data from the
journal. If no units are specified, show system status. If
combined with <option>--all</option> also shows status of
combined with <option>--all</option> also show the status of
all units (subject to limitations specified with
<option>-t</option>). If a PID is passed, show information
about the unit the process belongs to.</para>

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man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml
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@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
is a unit generator that automatically discovers root,
<filename>/home</filename>, <filename>/srv</filename>
and swap partitions and creates mount and swap units
for them, based on the the partition type GUIDs of
for them, based on the partition type GUIDs of
GUID partition tables (GPT). It implements the <ulink
url="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Specifications/DiscoverablePartitionsSpec/">Discoverable
Partitions Specification</ulink>. Note that this
@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
Partition (ESP) is located on. It will only look for
the other partitions on the same physical disk the
root file system is located on. These partitions will
not be search on systems where the root file system is
not be searched on systems where the root file system is
distributed on multiple disks, for example via btrfs
RAID.</para>

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man/systemd-journal-remote.xml
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@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
(<command>systemd-journal-remote</command> requests and pulls
the data), or "passive"
(<command>systemd-journal-remote</command> waits for a
connection and than receives events pushed by the other side).
connection and then receives events pushed by the other side).
</para>
<para>
@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<term><option>--listen-raw=<replaceable>ADDRESS</replaceable></option></term>
<listitem><para><replaceable>ADDRESS</replaceable> must be an
address suitable for <option>ListenStream=</option> (c.f.
address suitable for <option>ListenStream=</option> (cf.
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.socket</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>).
<command>systemd-journal-remote</command> will listen on this
socket for connections. Each connection is expected to be a
@ -195,8 +195,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
end with <filename>.journal</filename>. The file will be
created if it does not exist. When necessary (journal file
full, or corrupted) the file will be renamed following normal
journald rules and a new journal file will be created in it's
stead. </para></listitem>
journald rules and a new journal file will be created in its
stead.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>

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man/systemd-nspawn.xml
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@ -340,7 +340,7 @@
container's name (as specified with
<option>--machine=</option>), prefixed
with <literal>ve-</literal>. The
container side of the the Ethernet
container side of the Ethernet
link will be named
<literal>host0</literal>. Note that
<option>--network-veth</option>

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man/systemd-run.xml
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@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<varlistentry>
<term><option>--description=</option></term>
<listitem><para>Provide description for the service or scope
<listitem><para>Provide a description for the service or scope
unit. If not specified, the command itself will be used as a
description. See <varname>Description=</varname> in
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.unit</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.

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man/systemd.exec.xml
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@ -341,7 +341,7 @@
<para>The files listed with this
directive will be read shortly before
the process is executed (more
specifically, this means after all
specifically, after all
processes from a previous unit state
terminated. This means you can
generate these files in one unit
@ -1022,7 +1022,7 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><varname>AppArmorProfile=</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Take a profile name as argument.
<listitem><para>Takes a profile name as argument.
The process executed by the unit will switch to
this profile when started. Profiles must already
be loaded in the kernel, or the unit will fail.
@ -1427,7 +1427,7 @@
<varname>systemd.setenv=</varname> (see
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>). Additional
variables may also be set through PAM,
c.f. <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pam_env</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
cf. <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pam_env</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
</refsect1>
<refsect1>

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man/systemd.link.xml
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@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>If the hardware has a persistent
MAC address, as most hardware should,
and this is used by the kernel, nothing
and if it is used by the kernel, nothing
is done. Otherwise, a new MAC address
is generated which is guaranteed to be
the same on every boot for the given

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man/systemd.socket.xml
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@ -571,7 +571,7 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><varname>PipeSize=</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Takes an size in
<listitem><para>Takes a size in
bytes. Controls the pipe buffer size
of FIFOs configured in this socket
unit. See

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src/core/unit-printf.c
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@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ int unit_full_printf(Unit *u, const char *format, char **ret) {
/* This is similar to unit_name_printf() but also supports
* unescaping. Also, adds a couple of additional codes:
*
* %f the the instance if set, otherwise the id
* %f the instance if set, otherwise the id
* %c cgroup path of unit
* %r where units in this slice are placed in the cgroup tree
* %R the root of this systemd's instance tree