From e124ccdf5bd205982d7d64f26a42ab5109972d39 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?Zbigniew=20J=C4=99drzejewski-Szmek?= Date: Wed, 13 Sep 2017 23:02:34 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] man: rework grammatical form of sentences in a table in systemd.exec(5) "Currently, the following values are defined: xxx: in case " is awkward because "xxx" is always defined unconditionally. It is _used_ in case is true. Correct this and a bunch of other places where the sentence structure makes it unclear what is the subject of the sentence. --- man/systemd.exec.xml | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml index ca7d042d65..625063f1c0 100644 --- a/man/systemd.exec.xml +++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml @@ -1972,35 +1972,35 @@ CapabilityBoundingSet=~CAP_B CAP_C success - In case the service ran successfully and exited cleanly + The service ran successfully and exited cleanly. protocol - In case of a protocol violation: the service did not take the steps required by its unit configuration (specifically what is configured in its Type= setting) + A protocol violation occurred: the service did not take the steps required by its unit configuration (specifically what is configured in its Type= setting). timeout - In case of an operation timeout + One of the steps timed out. exit-code - If a service process exited with a non-zero exit code; see $EXIT_CODE below for the actual exit code returned. + Service process exited with a non-zero exit code; see $EXIT_CODE below for the actual exit code returned. signal - If a service process was terminated abnormally by a signal, without dumping core; see $EXIT_CODE below for the actual signal causing the termination + A service process was terminated abnormally by a signal, without dumping core. See $EXIT_CODE below for the actual signal causing the termination. core-dump - If a service process terminated abnormally with a signal and dumped core, also see $EXIT_CODE for the signal causing the termination + A service process terminated abnormally with a signal and dumped core. See $EXIT_CODE below for the signal causing the termination. watchdog - If the watchdog keep-alive ping was enabled for the service but it missed the deadline. + Watchdog keep-alive ping was enabled for the service, but the deadline was missed. start-limit-hit - In case a start limit was applied to the unit and it was hit and the unit hence failed to start. See systemd.unit5's StartLimitIntervalSec= and StartLimitBurst= for details. + A start limit was defined for the unit and it was hit, causing the unit to fail to start. See systemd.unit5's StartLimitIntervalSec= and StartLimitBurst= for details. resources