man: add more commas for clarify and reword a few sentences

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Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek 2017-02-08 22:53:16 -05:00
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the image file carries the <literal>user.verity.roothash</literal> extended file attribute (see <citerefentry
project='man-pages'><refentrytitle>xattr</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>), then the root
hash is read from it, also as formatted hexadecimal characters. If the extended file attribute is not found (or
not supported by the underlying file system), but a file with the <filename>.roothash</filename> suffix is
found next to the image file, bearing otherwise the same name the root hash is read from it and automatically
used (again, as formatted hexadecimal characters).</para></listitem>
is not supported by the underlying file system), but a file with the <filename>.roothash</filename> suffix is
found next to the image file, bearing otherwise the same name, the root hash is read from it and automatically
used, also as formatted hexadecimal characters.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
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<term><varname>MountAPIVFS=</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Takes a boolean argument. If on, a private mount namespace for the unit's processes is created
and the API file systems <filename>/proc</filename>, <filename>/sys</filename> and <filename>/dev</filename>
will be mounted inside of it, unless they are already mounted. Note that this option has no effect unless used
in conjunction with <varname>RootDirectory=</varname>/<varname>RootImage=</varname> as these three mounts are generally mounted in the host
anyway, and unless the root directory is changed the private mount namespace will be a 1:1 copy of the host's,
and include these three mounts. Note that the <filename>/dev</filename> file system of the host is bind mounted
if this option is used without <varname>PrivateDevices=</varname>. To run the service with a private, minimal
version of <filename>/dev/</filename>, combine this option with
and the API file systems <filename>/proc</filename>, <filename>/sys</filename>, and <filename>/dev</filename>
are mounted inside of it, unless they are already mounted. Note that this option has no effect unless used in
conjunction with <varname>RootDirectory=</varname>/<varname>RootImage=</varname> as these three mounts are
generally mounted in the host anyway, and unless the root directory is changed, the private mount namespace
will be a 1:1 copy of the host's, and include these three mounts. Note that the <filename>/dev</filename> file
system of the host is bind mounted if this option is used without <varname>PrivateDevices=</varname>. To run
the service with a private, minimal version of <filename>/dev/</filename>, combine this option with
<varname>PrivateDevices=</varname>.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>