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man: wording and grammar updates 

This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted. I guess I can just skip over reporting ubiquitous comma
placement fixes…
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Jan Engelhardt 2013-10-15 08:58:51 +02:00 committed by Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
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man/journalctl.xml
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@ -157,14 +157,14 @@
<term><option>-l</option></term>
<listitem><para>Ellipsize fields when
they don't fit in available columns.
they do not fit in available columns.
The default is to show full fields,
allowing them to wrap or be truncated
by the pager if one is used.</para>
<para>Old options
<para>The old options
<option>-l</option>/<option>--full</option>
not useful anymore, except to undo
are not useful anymore, except to undo
<option>--no-full</option>.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/systemctl.xml
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@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service
<para>Depending on whether <option>--system</option>,
<option>--user</option>, <option>--runtime</option>,
or<option>--global</option>, is specified, this enables the unit
or <option>--global</option> is specified, this enables the unit
for the system, for the calling user only, for only this boot of
the system, or for all future logins of all users, or only this
boot. Note that in the last case, no systemd daemon
@ -861,7 +861,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service
</para>
<para>This command honors <option>--system</option>,
<option>--user</option>, <option>--runtime</option>,
<option>--user</option>, <option>--runtime</option> and
<option>--global</option> in a similar way as
<command>enable</command>.</para>
</listitem>
@ -921,7 +921,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service
<command>disable</command>, since it prohibits all kinds of
activation of the unit, including manual activation. Use
this option with care. This honors the
<option>--runtime</option> option, to only mask temporarily
<option>--runtime</option> option to only mask temporarily
until the next reoobt of the system.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/systemd-cgtop.xml
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@ -79,15 +79,15 @@
<varname>CPUAccounting=1</varname>,
<varname>MemoryAccounting=1</varname> and
<varname>BlockIOAccounting=1</varname> settings in the
unit files in question (See
unit files in question. See
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.resource-control</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
for details).</para>
for details.</para>
<para>To emphasize this: unless
<literal>CPUAccounting=1</literal>,
<literal>MemoryAccounting=1</literal> and
<literal>BlockIOAccounting=1</literal> are enabled for
the services in question no resource accounting will
the services in question, no resource accounting will
be available for system services and the data shown by
<command>systemd-cgtop</command> will be
incomplete.</para>

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man/systemd-cryptsetup-generator.xml
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@ -115,8 +115,8 @@
<term><varname>luks.uuid=</varname></term>
<term><varname>rd.luks.uuid=</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Takes a LUKS super
block UUID as argument. This will
<listitem><para>Takes a LUKS superblock
UUID as argument. This will
activate the specified device as part
of the boot process as if it was
listed in

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man/systemd.exec.xml
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@ -1027,7 +1027,7 @@
<listitem><para>User name (twice), home
directory, and the login shell.
Set for the units which
The variables are set for the units that
have <varname>User=</varname> set,
which includes user
<command>systemd</command> instances.
@ -1053,14 +1053,14 @@
<term><varname>$XDG_VTNR</varname></term>
<listitem><para>The identifier of the
session, and the seat name, and
session, the seat name, and
virtual terminal of the session. Set
by
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>pam_systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>
for login sessions.
<varname>$XDG_SEAT</varname> and
<varname>$XDG_VTNR</varname> will be
only set when attached to a seat and a
<varname>$XDG_VTNR</varname> will
only be set when attached to a seat and a
tty.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>

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man/systemd.resource-control.xml
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@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<para>Unit configuration files for services, slices, scopes,
sockets, mount points, and swap devices share a subset of
configuration options for resource control of spawned
processes. Internally, this relies on the the Control Groups
processes. Internally, this relies on the Control Groups
kernel concept for organizing processes in a hierarchial tree of
named groups for the purpose of resource management.</para>
@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<para>See the <ulink
url="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/ControlGroupInterface/">New
Control Group Interfaces</ulink> for an introduction how to make
Control Group Interfaces</ulink> for an introduction on how to make
use of resource control APIs from programs.</para>
</refsect1>
@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
path and a weight value to specify the device specific
weight value, between 10 and 1000. (Example: "/dev/sda
500"). The file path may be specified as path to a block
device node or as any other file in which case the backing
device node or as any other file, in which case the backing
block device of the file system of the file is
determined. This controls the
<literal>blkio.weight_device</literal> control group

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man/systemd.scope.xml
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@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<para>See the <ulink
url="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/ControlGroupInterface/">New
Control Group Interfaces</ulink> for an introduction how to make
Control Group Interfaces</ulink> for an introduction on how to make
use of scope units from programs.</para>
<para>Unless <varname>DefaultDependencies=false</varname>

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man/systemd.service.xml
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@ -369,7 +369,7 @@
case it will be replaced by the value
of the environment variable split up
at whitespace, resulting in zero or
more arguments. To pass literal dollar sign
more arguments. To pass a literal dollar sign,
use <literal>$$</literal>. Note that the first
argument (i.e. the program to execute)
may not be a variable, since it must

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man/systemd.unit.xml
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@ -1236,12 +1236,12 @@
<row>
<entry><literal>%r</literal></entry>
<entry>Root control group path where units are placed.</entry>
<entry>For system instances this usually resolves to <filename>/system</filename>, except in containers, where the path might be prefixed with the container's root control group.</entry>
<entry>For system instances, this usually resolves to <filename>/system</filename>, except in containers, where the path might be prefixed with the container's root control group.</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry><literal>%R</literal></entry>
<entry>Parent directory of the control group path where units are placed.</entry>
<entry>For system instances this usually
<entry>For system instances, this usually
resolves to <filename>/</filename>, except in
containers, where this resolves to the
container's root directory.</entry>

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man/tmpfiles.d.xml
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@ -158,11 +158,11 @@ L /tmp/foobar - - - - /dev/null</programlisting>
<varlistentry>
<term><varname>m</varname></term>
<listitem><para>If the
specified file path exists
specified file path exists,
adjust its access mode, group
and user to the specified
values and reset the SELinux
label. If it doesn't exist do
label. If it does not exist, do
nothing.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ L /tmp/foobar - - - - /dev/null</programlisting>
during cleaning. Use this type
to exclude paths from clean-up
as controlled with the Age
parameter. Unlike x this
parameter. Unlike x, this
parameter will not exclude the
content if path is a directory,
but only directory itself.

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man/udevadm.xml
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@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>--query=<replaceable>type</replaceable></option></term>
<listitem>
<para>Query the database for specified type of device
<para>Query the database for the specified type of device
data. It needs the <option>--path</option> or
<option>--name</option> to identify the specified
device. Valid queries are: <constant>name</constant>,
@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
<para>The <filename>/sys</filename> path of the device to
query, e.g.
<filename><optional>/sys</optional>/class/block/sda</filename>.
Note that this option usually isn't very useful, since
Note that this option usually is not very useful, since
<command>udev</command> can guess the type of the
argument, so <command>udevadm
--devpath=/class/block/sda</command> is equivalent to
@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The name of the device node or a symlink to query,
e.g. <filename><optional>/dev</optional>/sda</filename>.
Note that this option usually isn't very useful, since
Note that this option usually is not very useful, since
<command>udev</command> can guess the type of the
argument, so <command>udevadm --name=sda</command> is
equivalent to <command>udevadm /dev/sda</command>.</para>
@ -481,10 +481,10 @@
<listitem>
<para>Specify when udevadm should resolve names of users
and groups. When set to <constant>early</constant> (the
default) names will be resolved when the rules are
parsed. When set to <constant>late</constant> names will
default), names will be resolved when the rules are
parsed. When set to <constant>late</constant>, names will
be resolved for every event. When set to
<constant>never</constant> names will never be resolved
<constant>never</constant>, names will never be resolved
and all devices will be owned by root.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>