docs: rework awkward sentence in AUTOMATIC_BOOT_ASSESSMENT

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Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek 2020-08-05 19:44:37 +02:00
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@ -10,12 +10,11 @@ systemd provides support for automatically reverting back to the previous
version of the OS or kernel in case the system consistently fails to boot. This
support is built into various of its components. When used together these
components provide a complete solution on UEFI systems, built as add-on to the
[Boot Loader
Specification](https://systemd.io/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION). However, the
different components may also be used independently, and in combination with
other software, to implement similar schemes, for example with other boot
loaders or for non-UEFI systems. Here's a brief overview of the complete set of
components:
[Boot Loader Specification](https://systemd.io/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION).
However, the different components may also be used independently, and in
combination with other software, to implement similar schemes, for example with
other boot loaders or for non-UEFI systems. Here's a brief overview of the
complete set of components:
* The
[`systemd-boot(7)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/systemd-boot.html)
@ -45,11 +44,10 @@ components:
* The `boot-complete.target` target unit (see
[`systemd.special(7)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/systemd.special.html))
serves as a generic extension point both for units that shall be considered
necessary to consider a boot successful on one side (example:
`systemd-boot-check-no-failures.service` as described above), and units that
want to act only if the boot is successful on the other (example:
`systemd-bless-boot.service` as described above).
serves as a generic extension point both for units that are necessary to
consider a boot successful (example: `systemd-boot-check-no-failures.service`
as described above), and units that want to act only if the boot is
successful (example: `systemd-bless-boot.service` as described above).
* The
[`kernel-install(8)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/kernel-install.html)