docs: rework awkward sentence in AUTOMATIC_BOOT_ASSESSMENT

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Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek 2020-08-05 19:44:37 +02:00
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@ -10,12 +10,11 @@ systemd provides support for automatically reverting back to the previous
version of the OS or kernel in case the system consistently fails to boot. This version of the OS or kernel in case the system consistently fails to boot. This
support is built into various of its components. When used together these support is built into various of its components. When used together these
components provide a complete solution on UEFI systems, built as add-on to the components provide a complete solution on UEFI systems, built as add-on to the
[Boot Loader [Boot Loader Specification](https://systemd.io/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION).
Specification](https://systemd.io/BOOT_LOADER_SPECIFICATION). However, the However, the different components may also be used independently, and in
different components may also be used independently, and in combination with combination with other software, to implement similar schemes, for example with
other software, to implement similar schemes, for example with other boot other boot loaders or for non-UEFI systems. Here's a brief overview of the
loaders or for non-UEFI systems. Here's a brief overview of the complete set of complete set of components:
components:
* The * The
[`systemd-boot(7)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/systemd-boot.html) [`systemd-boot(7)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/systemd-boot.html)
@ -45,11 +44,10 @@ components:
* The `boot-complete.target` target unit (see * The `boot-complete.target` target unit (see
[`systemd.special(7)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/systemd.special.html)) [`systemd.special(7)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/systemd.special.html))
serves as a generic extension point both for units that shall be considered serves as a generic extension point both for units that are necessary to
necessary to consider a boot successful on one side (example: consider a boot successful (example: `systemd-boot-check-no-failures.service`
`systemd-boot-check-no-failures.service` as described above), and units that as described above), and units that want to act only if the boot is
want to act only if the boot is successful on the other (example: successful (example: `systemd-bless-boot.service` as described above).
`systemd-bless-boot.service` as described above).
* The * The
[`kernel-install(8)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/kernel-install.html) [`kernel-install(8)`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/kernel-install.html)